The final two editorials needed a bit more work done to them, the madness of crowds piece originally had a very similar concept to the revisited version however it also included a padlock on the cage, the lock was unnecessary and took attention away from the cards and chips. I repainted the piece using a similar style because i wanted to still have a consistent theme/style running throughout my 'editorial set'. In the piece i also added more detail to the cards and chips as the original piece was rather blurred and not detailed enough.
And finally on the ' how to write a book in 30 days' piece i kept the original typewriter image but made the paper come fly out the typewriter. This makes the image much less static and is now more interesting to look at.